Monday, October 1, 2012

Revisions

I feel as if I've been revising the same WIP forever.  But that's only because I find every excuse not to work on it.  I'm one of those people who loves writing first drafts and isn't particularly fond of revising. 

Usually, once I dive into the work, I'm good to go for at least an hour.  It's the starting that's the problem.  I almost have to bribe myself (Hey, self, you can check Twitter ONLY if you revise one whole scene).

Tonight I've been working on one very, very long scene.  I need to delete chunks of it and break up the rest into shorter scenes.  And I have to move some stuff around, and add a few bits of info that are important for later in the book.  When I first looked at this scene tonight, the changes seemed insurmountable.  But now I'm 3/4 of the way finished with it.  Of course, that's taken me over an hour to get through, but the book will be better for it.

I'm just ready to have this manuscript revised and off to beta readers.  But I'm only on the plot revisions.  I still have to comb through it at least two more times - once for character arcs and once for continuity and stronger writing. 

Patience is not easy.

11 comments:

  1. Revising is so difficult sometimes. I use things like facebook to motivate myself too. Sometimes it works, but sometimes I cheat.

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  2. Gail,

    It's a shame that more people aren't following your posts yet, because you share the journey of writing very effectively. I am writing a middle-grades novel for my National Novel Writing Month project, and I dread the plot holes that will stare back up at me when I am done.

    I'd love to share notes. Good luck!

    Ron

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    1. Hope your NaNo-ing is going well! I'm hopelessly behind on my NaNo project.

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  3. Gail, I just flipped over from Authoress blog site after reading your comment. You are hysterical. I'll follow you - now that you have a follow button! Are you in the Bakers 60 with me??

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    1. aw, thank you! :) I am one of the lucky 60. #34 - Don't Fall Down. Which one are you?

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    2. I'm #47 Anthony Wish - Broke but just got an e mail saying they can't find me. Freakin' just a little

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    3. Yikes! Hope that gets fixed!!

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  4. I find the same thing with revisions. I know they're making my work tighter, but distractions seem easier to find, with each round I do.  

    Looking forward to reading your Baker's Dozen entry! (I'll be at # 31 :) )

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    1. Yay, we're neighbors in the contest. :)

      It seems as if the revisions are never-ending. Even when I think I'm finished, I find something else to change.

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  5. I'm right there with you. I've thought I was doing my final read through so many times now!  
    Hopefully it's this next one :)

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